Wednesday, April 18, 2012
Week 12: THEME REWRITE
It's getting sunny, I can feel the edge of summer ready to burst. Just returned from Maryland's 70 degree weather a month ago. Yes, living in Maine, things take a little longer to hit this far up north. My flowers have started to bloom as I can see my chives beginning to grow too! The sunshine rises about 6 a.m. I enjoy the warmth as I drive to get my morning coffee. I bought a tanning package this week to get a head start. Summer is coming, I thought, til I woke up to windy, chilling, rainy 30 degree weather this morning!
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Well, you're writing about juxtaposition without actually juxtaposing A to B, so you take a risk here all right, but I don't think it pays off--try a rewrite where you actually use juxtaposition (or humor or irony or some othe risky technique) in the service of a piece of writing. In other words, as the cliche goes, don't tell--show.
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