Her appearance is neat and clean. She looks wholesome and kind. She has long red hair and dresses real nice. She's about 5'5 and 125 pounds. She's outgoing and full of spunk. Her smile is genuine, it lights up her face.
She's funny and cute. She can be sweet. She giggles and makes others laugh.
She's also tomboyish, loves to get dirty. You can find her four wheeling and mudding in big trucks. She loves attention and likes to have fun.
Don't piss her off, she has another side! She throws things, I've seen them fly! Don't insult her or someone she loves. Her words will rip you apart! "Fuck you, you piece of shit!", I've heard her yell! Words you wouldn't think come out of her mouth! The big dent she kicked in the car is still there. There are holes in the wall in her apartment. Outside she seems fine, but inside she torments herself! She called him a liar and punched him right in the face! She wrapped a cell phone cord around hr boyfriends neck! She can get crazy, obviously violent.
She's fucked up, pain runs deep. She needs help, but never listens! She means well, but gets out of control! She fits the stereotype "spitfire" all too well.
She has her good days, but look out for bad!
NIce--I am a huge believer in vignette and a huge hater of over-explanation. I like to be presented with material and be allowed to turn my imagination loose--too much explanation locks down that possibility.
ReplyDeleteYou walk the line perfectly here between too much and too little. Graf 4 is obviously the engine driving all this material: nothing like the negative and the bad news to get a writer's and reader's minds in gear!